tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8820796878382435421.post8186464228582640110..comments2023-09-22T04:06:12.150-04:00Comments on Difficult River: Grey Chambered MoonMartin A. Bartelshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11916293996057633175noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8820796878382435421.post-59082766177014709922012-07-20T06:15:12.432-04:002012-07-20T06:15:12.432-04:00Martin - I have of course not read all your work b...Martin - I have of course not read all your work but find this outstanding and perhaps it may be your best?<br /><br />I have been desperately trying to pick out a favourite piece and think this <br /><br />"In the end, I apologize. There is a peculiar chamber<br />of the heart reserved for remorse, the place from which blood falls<br />when pierced by love or lust, the place of abandon or recourse,<br />the place from which we choose to ignore wisdom<br />and rely instead upon hope—that impossible, scathing moon<br />that drenches us in a constant monochromatic palette of grey."<br /><br />might be it - I say 'think' for in reality it is all truly beautiful.<br /><br />Anna :o]hyperCRYPTICalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11967085628384237933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8820796878382435421.post-32435067524897785172012-07-16T13:45:42.908-04:002012-07-16T13:45:42.908-04:00This is my first experiment with the demanding &qu...This is my first experiment with the demanding "sestina" structure. You can learn more about its history and specific order of word repetitions at poets.org/viewmedia.php/prmMID/5792.<br /><br />Thanks for reading! Feel free to share comments.Martin A. Bartelshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11916293996057633175noreply@blogger.com